适用于新高考新教材2024版高考英语二轮复习题组限时满分练11应用文写作 读后续写（5份打包）

满分练(十一)　应用文写作+读后续写
(限时:40分钟)
Ⅰ.应用文写作
(2023河北沧州一模)
假定你是李华,你的美国朋友Peter暑假要来中国旅游,他希望你推荐一家中国主题公园,请你给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.主题公园的名字和位置;
2.你推荐的理由;
3.表示欢迎。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请在相应位置作答。
Dear Peter,
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Yours,
Li Hua
Ⅱ.读后续写
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
(2023广东佛山二模)
Alice and her family went on a camping trip along the seaside.Upon arrival,Dad called for a meeting.He announced,“There are lots of jobs to be done.It’s no fun on holiday if Mum and I do all the work,so I come up with this pocket money chart.In this way,everyone has to do something,and you must do your own job every day!If you do your jobs well,you will get some extra pocket money!”
Looking at the chart,which had their names on it next to a list of jobs,the kids frowned (皱眉) at the idea.Unwillingly,they began to do their jobs.Alice washed up the dishes.Mike,the youngest brother,dried the dishes.Jeff,Alice’s twin brother,took their dog for a walk.
The next day they went to the beach.After playing some time in the sea,they went to look for shells along the beach.Suddenly,Alice found a strange-looking rock.She picked it up and showed it to Dad.“You’ve found a fossil (化石)!It was once a shellfish and has turned into a rock after millions of years!” Dad said happily.Greatly inspired,Alice continued her search,determined to find a better one,but she failed.Darkness fell,and Alice had to head back to the campsite with her family in disappointment.On the way back they stopped at a shop,where Alice spotted some amazing fossils!But soon she found they were too expensive!
Back at the camp,Alice was still thinking of the amazing fossils in the shop.Suddenly an idea occurred to her,“I’ll do everyone’s job and then I can get all the extra pocket money to buy a fossil!” The next morning,Alice offered to dry the dishes and walk the dog,which greatly pleased Mike and Jeff.But things didn’t go as Alice planned.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
When Dad saw Alice walking the dog,he was confused.__________________________
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Later that morning,Mike and Jeff approached Alice when they found she was unhappy._
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答案：
满分练(十一)　应用文写作+读后续写
Ⅰ.
Dear Peter,
I am so glad to hear from you.I’m writing to recommend you to go to Chinese Tea Culture Theme Park located in the suburban area of Beijing.
Walking along the alley,you can see lots of different “tea” characters written by famous scholars.The history of tea growing in China and the special ways of cooking different tea,such as Longjing tea,and Pu’er tea are also shown on the cultural wall in the park.Besides,the park is full of unique tea houses,which allows visitors to taste various tea.
I sincerely invite you to come here and experience our tea culture.
Yours,
Li Hua
1.词汇积累
(1)位于:belocatedin;be situated in;lie in
(2)出名的:famous;well-known
(3)此外:besides;moreover;in addition
(4)各种各样的:various;varietiesof;varied;all kinds of
2.高分句型
(1)Walking along the alley,you can see lots of different “tea” characters written by famous scholars.(运用了现在分词短语Walking along作状语)
(2)Besides,the park is full of unique tea houses,which allows visitors to taste various tea.(运用了关系代词which引导的非限制性定语从句)
Ⅱ.[语篇解读]本文是一篇记叙文。文章讲述了Alice和她的家人沿着海边露营,她的爸爸提出每个孩子可以通过做一些工作来赚取零花钱,孩子们并不情愿做这些工作。第二天,他们去了海滩。在海里玩了一段时间后,他们沿着海滩去找贝壳。突然,Alice发现了一块奇怪的石头,爸爸告诉她那是化石,Alice决定寻找更好的,在一家商店里她发现了一些令人惊奇的化石,但是太贵了,她决定干所有孩子们的工作来获得零花钱买化石,但事情并没有像Alice计划的那样发展。
[思路分析]
1.段落续写:
(1)由第一段首句内容“当爸爸看到爱丽丝在遛狗时,他很困惑。”可知,第一段可描写爸爸对爱丽丝做其他孩子的工作一事不满意。
(2)由第二段首句内容“那天上午晚些时候,迈克和杰夫发现爱丽丝不开心,就去找她。”可知,第二段可描写爱丽丝的兄弟们如何帮助爱丽丝,让爱丽丝高兴起来。
2.续写线索:爸爸询问——爱丽丝解释——爸爸教育爱丽丝——爱丽丝的感受——兄弟们送给爱丽丝零花钱——爱丽丝高兴——感悟
[参考范文]
WhenDadsawAlicewalkingthedog,hewasconfused.Obviously,he was not happy about this.When Alice came back,Dad asked why she was doing Jeff’s job.Alice stuttered,“I...I just want to earn all the extra pocket money to buy that fossil in the shop.”“I’m sorry,Alice.I’m afraid you can’t.You all have to do the jobs—not just you.The point is that we share the jobs,” Dad said.Hearing what Dad said,Alice was taken hold of by a surge of disappointment mixed with sadness.She thought it was unfair that Dad just ignored her hard work.
Laterthatmorning,MikeandJeffapproachedAlicewhentheyfoundshewasunhappy.They presented a small box and urged her to open it.Alice had no idea what was going on,but seeing her two brothers’ eyes twinkling with eagerness,she opened it.The moment she saw what was inside,Alice jumped up with joy.It was her brothers’ extra pocket money,with which she could afford one of the fossils she dreamed about!She threw her arms around her brothers,tears welling up in her eyes.Jeff said,“Dad told us your plan.” It dawned on Alice that Dad was trying to tell her that rules are rules but love between family members never fails.
1.词汇积累
(1)行为类
①询问:ask;inquire
②递交:present;hand
③拥抱:throw one’s arms around sb.;embrace sb.
(2)情绪类
①悲伤:sadness;sorrow
②高兴:joy;delight
2.高分句型
(1)When Alice came back,Dad asked why she was doing Jeff’s job.(由When引导的时间状语从句和why引导的宾语从句)
(2)It dawned on Alice that Dad was trying to tell her that rules are rules but love between family members never fails.(由that引导的主语从句和that引导的宾语从句)满分练(十二)　应用文写作+读后续写
(限时:40分钟)
Ⅰ.应用文写作
(2023湖北十堰二模)
假定你是学生会干事李华,你校将举办一场主题为“Artificial Intelligence (AI) and Modern Education”的讲座,请你用英文为校宣传栏写一则通知,内容包括:
1.讲座内容;
2.讲座时间和地点;
3.欢迎积极参加。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请在相应位置作答。
Notice
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The Students’ Union
Ⅱ.读后续写
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
(2023湖南怀化二模)
Boys like to be considered to be popular with others.Martin was such a young and generous boy,who thought he had loads of good friends in school.He was always showing off to his family members that he had the maximum number of friends in school.Also,he claimed how friendly he was with everyone.His family members wanted him to recognize the reality,thus not being cheated in the future.
One day as he was talking triumphantly about his friends at home again,his father called him for a bet.Father said,“Martin,I bet you for the cycle you wanted.” Martin asked,“What’s the bet ” Father thought for a while and answered,“I bet you do not have as many friends as you think.Everyone is not your real friend.I’m sure many of them are nothing more than your classmates,in other words,they are just your fair-weather friends.” Martin,without a second thought,accepted the challenge.
However,he had no idea how to test whether his classmates were real friends or not,so he asked his father about the testing way.A bright smile spread across the face of his father,“Wait a minute.I have just exactly what you need.It is a special item in my collection.Let me go and bring it.” Martin waited curiously.Several minutes later,Martin’s father returned,walking towards him and looking like he was carrying something heavy.But Martin could not see anything.
His father explained,“You see,this is a magic chair.It is invisible,and it is rather difficult to sit on it.You take this to your school.If you manage to sit on it,the special chair will activate its magic.Then you will be able to tell who are your real friends.”
The next day,brave and determined,Martin took the magic invisible chair to school.
注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
During lunchtime,he gathered his friends and asked them to form a circle.____________
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Now he could find out who were his real friends.________________________________
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答案：
满分练(十二)　应用文写作+读后续写
Ⅰ.
Notice
In order to have a better understanding of AI,an outstanding online English lecture about Artificial Intelligence (AI) and Modern Education will be held in the library from 2:30 p.m.to 4:00 p.m.next Friday.Here are some relevant details about it.
To begin with,the topic of the lecture is Ban or Welcome AI to Campus.As we know,AI is a new technology,which is not only eye-catching but also controversial.What’s more,every one of you will be welcome to participate in it,enjoying the lecture,having a heated discussion afterwards and giving your own comments.
The Students’ Union
1.词汇积累
(1)举行:beheld;take place
(2)首先:tobeginwith;firstly
(3)此外:what’s more;inaddition
(4)参加:participatein;take part in
2.高分句型
(1)As we know,AI is a new technology,which is not only eye-catching but also controversial.(运用了As和which引导的非限制性定语从句)
(2)What’s more,every one of you will be welcome to participate in it,enjoying the lecture,having a heated discussion afterwards and giving your own comments.(运用了现在分词作状语)
Ⅱ.[语篇解读]本文是一篇记叙文。文章讲述了男孩马丁自认为有很多朋友,并向家人炫耀。他和父亲打赌,他的父亲通过一把隐形魔法椅子测试谁是真正的朋友,最后马丁感悟到什么是真正的朋友。
[思路分析]
1.段落续写:
(1)由第一段首句内容“午餐时间,他召集朋友们,让他们围成一个圈。”可知,第一段可描写马丁测试魔法椅子,不断摔倒,最终有一次成功了。
(2)由第二段首句内容“现在他可以知道谁是他真正的朋友了。”可知,第二段可描写马丁周围的朋友的不同反应以及感悟到什么是真正的朋友。
2.续写线索:马丁有很多朋友——和父亲打赌——隐形椅子测试朋友——不同朋友的反应——真正的朋友
[参考范文]
Duringlunchtime,hegatheredhisfriendsandaskedthemtoformacircle.Standing in the middle,Martin announced,“Friends,you are about to see my magic chair here.Watch closely.” Slowly,Martin tried sitting on the chair.But he missed and fell straight onto his backside.Everyone around him burst into laughter.He made another attempt to sit and fell again.This time,there comes a few catcalls.Martin did not give up.He kept trying and fell to the ground.The laughs continued.Squeezing out a bitter smile,he tried again and did not fall this time.He finally experienced the magic.
Nowhecouldfindoutwhowerehisrealfriends.Looking around,Martin saw four of his friends,John,Abram,Juli,and Terry carrying him up,so he didn’t fall.At the same time,many others he had thought of as friends were doing nothing but make fun of him,enjoying each and every fall.Martin returned home and narrated the day’s story to his father.Father was happy that he could find his real friends.The next day he bought a new cycle for Martin.Martin realized it was not the quantity of friends but the quality that mattered.
1.词汇积累
(1)行为类
①仔细看:watch closely;observe carefully
②突然大笑:burst into laughter;burst out laughing
③取笑他:make fun of him;make a joke of/about him
(2)情绪类
①苦笑:a bitter smile;a wry smile
②高兴:happy;delighted
2.高分句型
(1)Squeezing out a bitter smile,he tried again and did not fall this time.(使用了现在分词短语Squeezing out作伴随状语)
(2)Martin realized it was not the quantity of friends but the quality that mattered.(使用了强调句以及not...but...句式结构)满分练(十三)　应用文写作+读后续写
(限时:40分钟)
Ⅰ.应用文写作
(2023山东青岛二模)
假定你是李华,正准备参加校英文诗歌朗诵比赛。请给外教Mr.Brown写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.介绍比赛;
2.请他推荐英文诗歌;
3.请他帮忙指导。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请在相应位置作答。
Dear Mr.Brown,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Ⅱ.读后续写
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
(2023山西大同一模)
Lucy was the only child in her family.She had a quarrel with her mother that afternoon and she ran out of the house angrily.She couldn’t help weeping sorrowfully when she thought of the scolding from her mother.Having wandered aimlessly in the street for hours,she felt a little hungry and wished for something to eat.She stood beside a stand for a while,watching the middle-aged seller busy doing his business.However,with no money in hand,she gave a sigh and had to leave.
The seller behind the stand noticed the young girl and asked,“Hey,girl,you want to have the noodles ”
“Oh,yes,but I don’t have money on me,” she replied.
“That’s nothing.I’ll treat you today,” said the man.“Come in.”
The seller brought her a bowl of noodles,the smell so attractive.As she was eating,Lucy cried silently.
“What is it ” asked the man kindly.
“Nothing.Actually,I was just touched by your kindness!” said Lucy as she wiped her tears.“Even a stranger on the street will give me a bowl of noodles,while my mother drove me out of the house.She showed no care for me.She is so merciless compared to a stranger!” Hearing the words,the seller smiled,“Girl,do you really think so I only gave you a bowl of noodles and you thanked me a lot.But it is your mother who has raised you since you were a baby.Can you number the times she cooked for you Have you expressed your gratitude to her ”
Lucy sat there,speechless and numb with shock;she remembered her mother’s familiar face and weathered hands.“Why didn’t I think of that A bowl of noodles from a stranger made me feel grateful.Why haven’t I thanked my mum for what she has done for me ”
On the way home,Lucy made up her mind to make an apology to her mother for her rudeness as soon as she arrived home.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
Approaching the doorway,_________________________________________________
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A gentle touch on her hair called her mind back.________________________________
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答案：
满分练(十三)　应用文写作+读后续写
Ⅰ.
Dear Mr.Brown,
I am preparing to participate in the school’s English poetry recitation competition.The competition is aimed at providing a platform for the students to showcase their language skills,fluency,and expression.
I would like to ask for your help in selecting a suitable English poem for me to recite.If it isn’t too much trouble,I wanted to inquire if you would be willing to coach me in my recitation skills.I am confident that with your guidance,I would be able to improve and perform to the best of my ability.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
1.词汇积累
(1)参加:participatein;take part in
(2)比赛:competition;match
(3)帮助:help;aid
(4)指导:coach;guide
2.高分句型
(1)If it isn’t too much trouble,I wanted to inquire if you would be willing to coach me in my recitation skills.(运用了If引导的条件状语从句)
(2)I am confident that with your guidance,I would be able to improve and perform to the best of my ability.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
Ⅱ.[语篇解读]本文是一篇记叙文。文章以人物为线索展开,讲述了小女孩Lucy和母亲争吵后离家出走,走在街上,觉得饿了,在一个卖面条的摊位前停下,摊主知道情况后,免费请她吃了一碗面并听她倾诉,她很感恩,摊主却告诉她:“我请你吃一碗面,你就感激我,你想想你的妈妈养大你,给你做了多少顿饭呢 ”Lucy顿悟,决定回家和妈妈好好沟通。
[思路分析]
1.段落续写:
(1)由第一段首句内容“离家门口越来越近”可知,第一段可描写Lucy在走到家门口进门前的心理活动。
(2)由第二段首句内容“头顶的轻轻抚摸把她的思绪拉回来。”可知,第二段可描写Lucy和妈妈的谈话。
2.续写线索:站在家门口——敲门——妈妈开门——承认错误——妈妈担心——拥抱
[参考范文]
Approachingthedoorway,Lucy was very nervous and took a deep breath.Standing in front of the door,she was afraid whether her mother would forgive her for her rudeness.But when she thought of her mother’s familiar face and the noodle seller’s kind advice,she decided to knock on the door bravely.Her mother opened the door but Lucy was so ashamed that she didn’t know what to say.
Agentletouchonherhaircalledhermindback.Lucy couldn’t help crying and said,“Sorry,mom,I know I have made a big mistake.I shouldn’t have quarreled with you.I shouldn’t have run away from home.Could you forgive me ” Lucy’s mother was moved,saying, “Good girl,never mind.I also should make an apology to you for scolding you angrily.I am very worried about you.” Tears rolled down from both of their faces and they hugged each other tightly.
1.词汇积累
(1)行为类
①推开门:open the door;push the door open
②哭了起来:can’t help crying;burst into tears
③向……道歉:say sorry to;apologize to
(2)情绪类
①羞愧/悔恨:be ashamed;feel regretful
②担心:be worried about;be concerned about
2.高分句型
(1)Standing in front of the door,she was afraid whether her mother would forgive her for her rudeness.(使用了现在分词作状语和连接词whether引导的宾语从句)
(2)But when she thought of her mother’s familiar face and the noodle seller’s kind advice,she decided to knock on the door bravely.(使用了由when引导的时间状语从句)
(3)I shouldn’t have quarreled with you.(使用了情态动词结构shouldn’t have done sth.表示“本不应该做某事”)满分练(十四)　应用文写作+读后续写
(限时:40分钟)
Ⅰ.应用文写作
(2023山西临汾一模)
为了丰富课余生活、缓解压力,上周日你校举办了一场高三师生足球友谊赛。作为校英文报编辑成员,请你写一篇报道,内容包括:
1.比赛目的;
2.比赛过程;
3.活动反响。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请在相应位置作答。
ATeacher-StudentFootballFriendly
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Ⅱ.读后续写
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
(2023安徽蚌埠三模)
For years,I posted pictures of my grandson,cute animals and delicious dishes,and video clips of people’s funny behaviour and the like on Meta.Moreover,I played a farm game or two on this popular social media site.I thought Meta was for fun,but I never expected a post I saw on Meta could have a significant impact on my life.
On November 12th,2010,I was on my way to a conference by plane.Suddenly,I suffered a heart attack.Luckily,there were three doctors on board.In less than a minute,I was given first aid.I survived,but months later,I was still trying to come to terms with what had happened.So I began to record how I survived this incident as well as my ideas about life on Meta daily,and started to care about Meta posts that had nothing to do with fun.
One morning in March,2011,I looked through my Meta feed and saw a friend’s post.She wrote,“Let go of anything unrealistic and all activities that do not mirror your brightest intentions for yourself.” The words touched me greatly.That night,I copied them onto a clean piece of paper and taped it to my laptop.
Actually,I was crazy about farm games then.I,along with many of my friends,played FarmVille.But one little farm game was not enough for me.I thought I needed more farms,more crops,and more livestock.All were in virtual form,of course.I had five different farms in five different games.And I spent hours on my farms every day.While attending to my virtual farms one day I looked out of the window and noticed the empty land in our backyard.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150 左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
Then I looked at the words on the piece of paper taped to my laptop,lost in thought.____
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Farming the real land was only the beginning,and I started to do more to enrich my real life.________________________________________________________________________
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答案：
满分练(十四)　应用文写作+读后续写
Ⅰ.
ATeacher-StudentFootballFriendly
Last Sunday witnessed a Teacher-Student Football Friendly of Senior Three in our school,which aimed to enrich students’ extracurricular life and relieve pressure.
The match was intense and exciting and both teams were in high spirits.Though the teachers took the lead by one goal in the first half,the students united into one,blocking the opponent’s three shots,and their confidence was greatly boosted.Towards the end,a student player scored a goal,sending the audience into extreme excitement.Finally,the Football Friendly ended in a draw of 1 versus 1.
The Football Friendly was well received by all participants,with students expressing gratitude for the school’s efforts to organize the event.Not only did the match help students cope with stress,but also it cultivated students’ courage and team spirit.
1.词汇积累
(1)旨在:aim to;beintendedto;be designed to;bemeantfor
(2)压力:pressure;stress;burden;strain
(3)令人兴奋的:exciting;exhilarating;thrilling
(4)虽然:though;although;even though;while
(5)培养:cultivate;foster;nurture
2.高分句型
(1)Last Sunday witnessed a Teacher-Student Football Friendly of Senior Three in our school,which aimed to enrich students’ extracurricular life and relieve pressure.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
(2)Though the teachers took the lead by one goal in the first half,the students united into one,blocking the opponent’s three shots,and their confidence was greatly boosted.(运用了Though引导的让步状语从句和现在分词形式作状语)
(3)Not only did the match help students cope with stress,but also it cultivated students’ courage and team spirit.(运用了not only...but also...的固定句型和Not only前置引起的部分倒装)
Ⅱ.[语篇解读]本文是一篇记叙文。文章以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者从沉迷于虚拟世界逐步转向专注现实生活的过程,并在参与很多现实生活的活动中收获了很多。
[思路分析]
1.段落续写:
(1)由第一段首句内容“然后我看着贴在笔记本电脑上的那张纸上的字,陷入了沉思。”可知,第一段可描写作者沉思的内容和受到的启发。
(2)由第二段首句内容“在真正的土地上耕种只是一个开始,我开始做更多的事情来丰富我的现实生活。”可知,第二段可描写作者在现实生活中所做的一些事情。
2.续写线索:反思自己——虚拟世界——受到启发——专注现实——各种活动——收获感悟
[参考范文]
ThenIlookedatthewordsonthepieceofpapertapedtomylaptop,lostinthought.I realized a funny fact.I planted and harvested virtual crops for hours every day while leaving the real land outside the window untouched.This was neither a meaningful life nor an activity that mirrored my highest intentions.How could I base my happiness on unreal goals Inspired,I decided to stop playing farm games and focus on real life.To begin with,I farmed the land in our backyard actively.
Farmingthereallandwasonlythebeginning,andIstartedtodomoretoenrichmyreallife.I walked my dog in the park,spent more time with my family,climbed mountains with my friends and attended various classes.These were activities that allowed me to make better use of my spare time and develop a positive attitude.The sentence I had copied from that Meta post became a mirror I used to examine how I should spend my time and energy,enabling me to live a healthier and richer life.
1.词汇积累
(1)行为类
①意识到:realize;be aware of;be conscious of
②收获:harvest;reap
③决定做某事:decide to do sth.;be determined to do sth.
(2)情绪类
①受到鼓舞的:inspired;encouraged
②积极:a positive attitude;act positively
2.高分句型
(1)This was neither a meaningful life nor an activity that mirrored my highest intentions.(运用了that引导的定语从句)
(2)These were activities that allowed me to make better use of my spare time and develop a positive attitude.(运用了that引导的定语从句)满分练(十五)　应用文写作+读后续写
(限时:40分钟)
Ⅰ.应用文写作
(2023福建福州二模)
假设你是李华,你校邀请在福建医科大学工作的外籍眼科专家Tim教授到校开设关于如何保护眼睛的讲座,作为校学生会主席,请根据以下内容用英文写一段欢迎稿,内容如下:
1.教授简介;
2.讲座意义;
3.表示欢迎。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请在相应位置作答。
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Ⅱ.读后续写
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
(2023浙江宁波二模)
When I adopted him,he had been rescued from death inside a tightly tied black trash bag abandoned right beside a garbage truck on the road.An alert garbage man noticed the bag moving and used a metal rake (耙子) to tear open the bag to look inside.There was my shaking puppy dog.The rake damaged the nerves in his back so he limped a little,but he could run as fast as lightning.
For my dog’s first birthday,I entered him in a fun run sponsored by our local Society for the Prevention of Cruelty to Animals (SPCA).I’m not much of a runner,but the run was only 3 kilometers,so I thought it would be fun for both of us.
We practiced for weeks.On our practice runs,he was always eager to go and usually dragged me along behind him.I worked on his leash (拴狗链) manners so that he wouldn’t trip me on the big day.I felt we were ready for anything.
The fun run was downtown among the big buildings,so the noise of barking dogs all around us rose to a deafening pitch at the start of the race.My dog was frightened when the starting tone went off.He had trouble running in the right direction with all the confusion around us.Soon the runners began to thin out,and my dog was running straight and fast.We were passing people and making great time.I was dreaming of a gold-medal finish.
However,when we were six blocks from the finish,my dog suddenly stopped and dropped to the ground like a sack of potatoes.I almost dislocated my shoulder from the sudden stop as I was pulled backward by the leash.
He was lying flat on his belly with his head down in the middle of the crossroads.At first I thought something bad had happened to him.He was shaking and sobbing.I did a quick check and couldn’t see anything wrong.I tried to get him up,but he refused.The police officer doing traffic control impatiently signed me to move away so he could release the cars.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
But I couldn’t get my seventy-five-pound dog to get up.__________________________
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Another half-block of carrying him brought the answer—a moving garbage truck._____
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答案：
满分练(十五)　应用文写作+读后续写
Ⅰ.
Dear fellow students,
Good afternoon!I am Li Hua,chairman of the Students’ Union.It’s my privilege on behalf of the school to welcome professor Tim here,a well-known eye specialist working at Fujian Medical University.
We’re delighted to have professor Tim deliver a lecture on how to protect our eyes.He will combine theory with practice.With his expertise,the lecture is bound to raise our awareness of eye healthcare and equip us with practical strategies to safeguard our eyes.Prepare yourself to be educated and inspired.
Before I hand over to Mr.Tim,I want to say once more:thank you and welcome.
1.词汇积累
(1)代表:onbehalfof;represent
(2)著名的:well-known;celebrated
(3)发表演讲:deliver a lecture;address a lecture
(4)保护:safeguard;defend;protect
2.高分句型
(1)It’s my privilege on behalf of the school to welcome professor Tim here,a well-known eye specialist working at Fujian Medical University.(运用了现在分词作定语)
(2)We’re delighted to have professor Tim deliver a lecture on how to protect your eyes.(运用了疑问词+不定式作宾语)
Ⅱ.[语篇解读]文章以作者和狗狗的故事为线索展开,讲述作者收养了一条被抛弃在路边垃圾车边的小狗,在狗一岁时报名参加了“快乐奔跑”比赛。比赛期间路边垃圾车的声音让狗狗回忆起被抛弃时的场景造成心理恐惧而不敢前行,最终作者得知了狗狗不跑的原因,帮助狗狗一起跑向终点。
[思路分析]
1.段落续写:
(1)由第一段首句内容“但我无法让我那只七十五磅重的狗起来。”可知,第一段可描写作者听到警察的驱赶后,试图让狗狗从地上站起来继续比赛,但是用尽方法都不成功。路人也开始责怪作者把狗狗逼得太紧。最终作者只能扛起狗狗,跑向终点。
(2)由第二段首句内容“在扛它走过半个街区后找到了答案——一辆正在行驶的垃圾车。”可知,第二段可描写作者明白了狗狗弃赛的原因后,试图安慰狗狗,直到它放松下来。最后作者和狗狗一起跑到了终点,虽然没有获得任何奖项,但是最终作者获得了狗狗的信任。
2.续写线索:帮狗站起来——失败——扛狗狗——知晓原因——安慰——获得信任
[参考范文]
ButIcouldn’tgetmyseventy-five-pounddogtogetup.The harder I tried to scoop him up from the pavement,the more he fought me.The officer yelling and cars honking,I pulled him with all my might,but in vain.Finally,I got my arm under him and lifted him up in a fireman’s carry,throwing him over my shoulder.As I staggered to the roadside,people around were taking my dog’s side,laughing I was running him too hard.I was fuming.My dog would run all day long and he wasn’t the least bit tired.
Anotherhalf-blockofcarryinghimbroughttheanswer—amovinggarbagetruck.Its sound must have hit my dog’s sensitive ears,so he cried louder and clawed at my back as we drew closer to it.I held on tighter and ran as fast as I could to get my sweet baby dog away from that scary garbage truck.I ran with him on my shoulder until I felt him relaxed,and then I set him down.He wagged his tail in gratitude for saving him from the garbage truck.Surely,we didn’t win any medals,but I won his trust forever.
1.词汇积累
(1)行为类
①抱起:scoop up;pick up
②蹒跚:stagger;totter
③靠近:draw closer to;approach
(2)情绪类
①生气:fume;angry;annoyed
②感激:gratitude;appreciation
2.高分句型
(1)The harder I tried to scoop him up from the pavement,the more he fought me.(运用了“the+比较级,the+比较级”句型)
(2)The officer yelling and cars honking,I pulled him with all my might,but in vain.(运用了独立主格结构)
(3)As I staggered to the roadside,people around were taking my dog’s side,laughing I was running him too hard.(运用了As引导的时间状语从句以及现在分词作伴随状语)